[Teas] Re: Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-09: (with COMMENT)

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Subject: [Teas] Re: Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-09: (with COMMENT)
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Hi, 

Thank you for the review and comments, Murray. 

We have fixed this in the latest version of the I-D:

URL:      https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-10.txt
Status:   https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing/
HTML:     https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-10.html
HTMLized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing
Diff:     https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-10

BR, Dan. 

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Subject: [Teas] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-09: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-09: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Section 1.1 defines "Infrastructure Resources" but that term doesn't exist (at
least in that form) in this document.