[Teas] <draft-ietf-teas-p2mp-loose-path-reopt-05>: Review

Vishnu Pavan Beeram <vishnupavan@gmail.com> Sat, 09 July 2016 18:28 UTC

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Subject: [Teas] <draft-ietf-teas-p2mp-loose-path-reopt-05>: Review
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Authors, Hi!

I've reviewed the current version of
<draft-ietf-teas-p2mp-loose-path-reopt-05>. My comments/suggestions
(editorial in nature) are in the attached text file.

Please do go through the comments and let me know if they can be addressed.
Regards,
-Pavan