Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-pce-native-ip-08.txt

Hi Aijun,

Thank you for handling most of my technical comments.

Non-blocking note - I would encourage the authors to keep thinking
about improving the deployment consideration section. I just noted
some points from the top of my head (it was not meant to be an
exhaustive list), I hope it could help you to think about adding more
clarity on the scope of the experiment, provide high-level detail and
maybe point to the PCEP extension for actual details.

Thanks!
Dhruv

On Tue, Jun 2, 2020 at 8:03 AM Aijun Wang <wangaijun@tsinghua.org.cn> wrote:
>
> Hi, Lou and Dhruv:
>
> The update version addresses mainly the comments from Dhruv. Please review
> it.
> Further comments and suggestions are also welcome
>
> If no other comments, can we ship this document out of the WG then?
>
> Best Regards.
>
> Aijun Wang
> China Telecom
>
>
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Traffic Engineering Architecture and
> Signaling WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : PCE in Native IP Network
>         Authors         : Aijun Wang
>                           Boris Khasanov
>                           Quintin Zhao
>                           Huaimo Chen
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-teas-pce-native-ip-08.txt
>         Pages           : 13
>         Date            : 2020-06-01
>
> Abstract:
>    This document defines the framework for traffic engineering within
>    native IP network, using multiple BGP sessions strategy and PCE
>    -based central control architecture.  The procedures described in
>    this document are experimental.  The experiment is intended to enable
>    research for the usage of PCE in native IP scenarios.  For this
>    purpose, this document describe the Central Control Dynamic Routing
>    (CCDR) framework and the PCEP extension is specified in
>    [I-D.ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-ip].
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-pce-native-ip/
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