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Hi Luis,
Good catch on section 3.2. For now we should consider cases for  network sl=
ices under one NSC.  However, we should also be clear that NSC will work wi=
th networks in different admin/operator domains using SBI. When this is not=
 possible, higher level orchestrator may request different slices from diff=
erent NSCs and connect them together.
-Kiran

From: Teas <teas-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Luis M. Contreras <contrera=
s.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Thursday, February 4, 2021 at 11:41
To: Vishnu Pavan Beeram <vishnupavan@gmail.com>
Cc: TEAS WG Chairs <teas-chairs@ietf.org>, TEAS WG <teas@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [Teas] WG Adoption poll - draft-nsdt-teas-ns-framework-05
Hi all,

Despite the fact that I acknowledge the value of the document, I feel more =
discussion is needed before adoption. So I don't support the adoption at th=
is stage. Essentially,

Some reasons for that are:

.- The document states in sec. 3.2 that the NSC from one operator could req=
uest IETF network slices to the NSC of another operator. This has several i=
mplications in the NSC, and as such, should require more discussion. For in=
stance: (1) there could be different levels of trustiness in the relationsh=
ip among operators tat could imply different levels of abstractions, not ne=
cessarily the same as with another kind of customer/user, then open the doo=
r to the support of different kind of information to be supported by the NB=
I; (2) the relationship between operators could come via higher level syste=
ms instead, then relaxing / modifying considerations such security, monitor=
ing information, etc; (3) having a direct relationship implies that one of =
the the SBI implementations of a NSC should the same as the NBI, to support=
 this possibility; (4) there should be a common understanding / definition =
of the abstractions between operators to express the services; etc

.- The document has a specific section for ACTN (sect. 4). In fact there wa=
s some discussion on the list about this, reflecting the fact that several =
interpretations could be provided for a mapping as the intended in Figure 1=
, without a single mapping of entities between ACTN and the intended framew=
ork. Besides that, a specific document describing the applicability of ACTN=
 to slicing (draft-king-teas-applicability-actn-slicing) is now work-in-pro=
gress, making the ACTN text in the framework document redundant with that o=
ther document. In my view, sect. 4 is more confusing than clarifying, so I =
prefer to remove it from the framework document, developing the applicabili=
ty of ACTN to slicing in that other dedicated document.

.- Section 3.5 described an initial workflow on the realization of IETF Net=
work Slices but it focuses only on provision. Other aspects of the IETF Net=
work SLice lifecycle are missing, and I think it would be important to desc=
ribe since this framework will become the basis for further specifications =
of functionality of the IETF NSC. For instance, capability exposure of the =
NSC (what happens if some SLOs cannot be provided?), fulfillment, assurance=
, etc, are not included/discussed.

This is not an exhaustive review, this is just to remark the need of more d=
iscussion for having clear the perimeter of the document before progressing=
 it into adoption, from my point of view.

Best regards

Luis


El jue, 4 feb 2021 a las 14:43, Vishnu Pavan Beeram (<vishnupavan@gmail.com=
<mailto:vishnupavan@gmail.com>>) escribi=F3:
All,

This is start of a *two* week poll on making
draft-nsdt-teas-ns-framework-05 a TEAS working group document. Please
send email to the list indicating "yes/support" or "no/do not support".
If indicating no, please state your reservations with the document. If
yes, please also feel free to provide comments you'd like to see
addressed once the document is a WG document.

The poll ends February 18th.

Thank you,
Pavan and Lou
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Hi Luis, <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Good catch on section 3.2. For now we should conside=
r cases for &nbsp;network slices under one NSC. &nbsp;However, we should al=
so be clear that NSC will work with networks in different admin/operator do=
mains using SBI. When this is not possible,
 higher level orchestrator may request different slices from different NSCs=
 and connect them together.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">-Kiran<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-bottom:12.0pt"><b><span style=3D"fon=
t-size:12.0pt;color:black">From:
</span></b><span style=3D"font-size:12.0pt;color:black">Teas &lt;teas-bounc=
es@ietf.org&gt; on behalf of Luis M. Contreras &lt;contreras.ietf@gmail.com=
&gt;<br>
<b>Date: </b>Thursday, February 4, 2021 at 11:41<br>
<b>To: </b>Vishnu Pavan Beeram &lt;vishnupavan@gmail.com&gt;<br>
<b>Cc: </b>TEAS WG Chairs &lt;teas-chairs@ietf.org&gt;, TEAS WG &lt;teas@ie=
tf.org&gt;<br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [Teas] WG Adoption poll - draft-nsdt-teas-ns-framework-=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Hi all,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Despite the fact that I acknowledge the value of the=
 document, I feel more discussion is needed&nbsp;before adoption. So I don'=
t support the adoption at this stage. Essentially,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Some reasons for that are:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">.- The document&nbsp;states in sec. 3.2 that the NSC=
 from one operator could request IETF network slices to the NSC of another =
operator. This has several implications in the NSC, and as such, should req=
uire more discussion. For instance: (1)
 there could be different levels of trustiness&nbsp;in the relationship amo=
ng operators tat could imply different levels of abstractions, not necessar=
ily the same as with another kind of customer/user, then open the door to t=
he support of different kind of information
 to be supported&nbsp;by the NBI; (2) the relationship between operators co=
uld come via higher level systems instead, then relaxing / modifying consid=
erations such security, monitoring information, etc; (3) having a direct re=
lationship implies that one of the the
 SBI implementations of a NSC should&nbsp;the same as the NBI, to support t=
his possibility; (4) there should be a common understanding / definition of=
 the abstractions between operators to express the services; etc<o:p></o:p>=
</p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">.- The document&nbsp;has a specific section for ACTN=
&nbsp;(sect. 4). In fact there was some discussion on the list about this, =
reflecting the fact that several interpretations could be provided for a ma=
pping as the intended in Figure 1, without a
 single mapping of entities between ACTN and the intended framework. Beside=
s that, a specific document describing the applicability of ACTN to slicing=
 (draft-king-teas-applicability-actn-slicing) is now work-in-progress, maki=
ng the ACTN text in the framework
 document redundant with that&nbsp;other document. In my view, sect. 4 is m=
ore confusing&nbsp;than clarifying, so I prefer to remove it from the frame=
work document, developing the applicability&nbsp;of ACTN to slicing in that=
 other dedicated document.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
</div>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">.- Section 3.5 described an initial workflow on the =
realization of IETF Network Slices but it focuses only on provision. Other =
aspects of the IETF Network SLice lifecycle are missing, and I think it wou=
ld be important to describe since
 this framework will become the basis for further specifications of functio=
nality of the IETF NSC. For instance, capability exposure of the NSC (what =
happens if some SLOs cannot be provided?), fulfillment, assurance, etc, are=
 not included/discussed.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">This is not an exhaustive review, this is just to re=
mark the need of more discussion&nbsp;for having clear the perimeter of the=
 document before progressing it into adoption, from my point of view.<o:p><=
/o:p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Best regards<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Luis<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">El jue, 4 feb 2021 a las 14:43, Vishnu Pavan Beeram =
(&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:vishnupavan@gmail.com">vishnupavan@gmail.com</a>&gt;=
) escribi=F3:<o:p></o:p></p>
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n 0in 0in 6.0pt;margin-left:4.8pt;margin-right:0in">
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">All,<br>
<br>
This is start of a *two* week poll on making<br>
draft-nsdt-teas-ns-framework-05 a&nbsp;TEAS&nbsp;working group document. Pl=
ease<br>
send email to the list indicating &quot;yes/support&quot; or &quot;no/do no=
t support&quot;.<br>
If indicating no, please state your reservations with the document. If<br>
yes, please also feel free to provide comments you'd like to see<br>
addressed once the document is a WG document.<br>
<br>
The poll ends February 18th.<br>
<br>
Thank you,<br>
Pavan and Lou<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">-- <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">___________________________________________<o:p></o:=
p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Luis M. Contreras<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><a href=3D"mailto:contreras.ietf@gmail.com" target=
=3D"_blank">contreras.ietf@gmail.com</a>&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><a href=3D"mailto:luismiguel.contrerasmurillo@telefo=
nica.com" target=3D"_blank">luismiguel.contrerasmurillo@telefonica.com</a><=
o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Global CTIO unit / Telefonica<o:p></o:p></p>
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