Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-04.txt

Kiran Makhijani <kiranm@futurewei.com> Wed, 09 September 2020 20:31 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-04.txt
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Hello TEAS,

We have followed Lou and Vishnu's suggestion and removed appendix-section, and created a place-holder in the main document for follow up work. We will continue to improve the document by incorporating other comments (that are addressable). 

Thanks
Kiran

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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Traffic Engineering Architecture and Signaling
> WG of the IETF.
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>         Title           : IETF Definition of Transport Slice
>         Authors         : Reza Rokui
>                           Shunsuke Homma
>                           Kiran Makhijani
>                           Luis M. Contreras
>                           Jeff Tantsura
> 	Filename        : draft-nsdt-teas-transport-slice-definition-04.txt
> 	Pages           : 19
> 	Date            : 2020-09-09
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document describes the definition of a slice in the transport
>    networks and its characteristics.  The purpose here is to bring
>    clarity and a common understanding of the transport slice concept and
>    describe related terms and their meaning.  It explains how transport
>    slices can be used in combination with end to end network slices, or
>    independently.
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