[Teas] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-25

Behcet Sarikaya <sarikaya2012@gmail.com> Wed, 05 June 2024 15:42 UTC

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From: Behcet Sarikaya <sarikaya2012@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 05 Jun 2024 10:42:22 -0500
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Hi Druv,

I am happy with Rev. 26 as all of the nits I had detected have been
resolved.

Regards,
Behcet

On Tue, Jun 4, 2024 at 11:42 AM Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi Behcet,
>
> Thanks for your review....
>
> On Mon, May 27, 2024 at 6:07 PM Behcet Sarikaya via Datatracker <
> noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
>
>> Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya
>> Review result: Ready with Nits
>>
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
>> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
>> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
>> like any other last call comments.
>>
>> For more information, please see the FAQ at
>>
>> <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>.
>>
>> Document: draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-??
>> Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya
>> Review Date: 2024-05-27
>> IETF LC End Date: 2024-05-30
>> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>>
>> Summary:This document presents a YANG data model generally applicable to
>> any
>>
>> mode of Virtual Network operations. The effort that went into the
>> document is appreciated.
>>
>> The document is well written and understandable.
>>
>>
>> Major issues:None
>>
>> Minor issues:None
>>
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>> The YANG model has been checked by YANGDOCTORS and the issues found have
>> been cleared by Rev. 25.
>>
>> I list here the nits I found:
>>
>> Section 1. MDSC <- MSDC (only one occurrence)
>>
>> Section 1.2
>>
>> this this document. (only one this is OK)
>>
>>
>> The document has 3 figures with the last one in Section 2.2
>>
>> afterwards the figure notation is dropped and illustration notation is
>> used.
>>
>> Note. This is just a comment no action needed.
>>
>>
> These have been updated -
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang/
>
> Thanks,
> Dhruv
>
>
>
>