[Teas] <draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-resource-sharing-proc-04> - Review

[Vishnu Pavan Beeram <[e-mail]>]

Authors, Hi!

I did a quick review of the current version of
<draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-resource-sharing-proc>.

Couple of nits. Please see if you can take care of those in the next
revision.

- There are quite a few places in the draft where the term “transport
networks” is used. In some places it appears to imply “transport networks
of all types”, while in other places (like in Section 3) it means “non
packet-based transport networks”. Please see if you can make the usage seem
consistent (might have to make some edits in Section 3).

- Update the list of authors/editors in the first page as per the guidance
provided in https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7322#section-4.1. (please see if
you can adhere to the "5 authors" limit; as an alternative, consider having
just one or two editors with others listed in the
Contributors/Acknowledgements section)

Regards,
-Pavan