Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-29

Tarek Saad <> Thu, 21 July 2022 15:59 UTC

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Hi Tom,

Thanks for your comments (as usual). We have published a revision -30 of the draft that have addressed most of your comments below (diffs at We are planning to upload a new revision to address the remaining ones.

Please see below inline for responses.

From: Teas <> on behalf of t petch <>
Date: Monday, April 11, 2022 at 7:18 AM
To: Lou Berger <>, TEAS WG <>
Cc: TEAS WG Chairs <>
Subject: Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-29
On 21/03/2022 13:28, Lou Berger wrote:
> All,
> This starts working group last call on
> Given the size of the document and this week's meeting, this will be an
> extended LC. The working group last call ends on April 13th.
> Please send your comments to the working group mailing list.
> Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document
> and believe it is ready for publication", are welcome!
> This is useful and important, even from authors.

It has been a few years since I reviewed this so the
Copyright 2019
seems about right.

However, reading Adrian's comments brought back memories and indeed, my
notes say 'three e-mail of comments' which suggests to me that they were
never acted on:-)

- there are ten references in the YANG to RFC that do not appear in the
I-D references (used to be four)

[TS]: Fixed in latest revision.

- abbreviations need expanding, I suggest in s.2 with a separate heading
to the current s.2

[TS]: We will add an abbreviations section in next revision.

- http: needs to be https:

[TS]: Fixed in latest revision.

- the TLP are out of date (that's new)

[TS]: Fixed in latest revision.

- the format of the tree diagram is clumsy - identifiers are split in
the middle, across lines

[TS]: Fixed in latest revision.

- revision should be 'Initial ..' not 'latest'

[TS]: Fixed in latest revision.

- /constraitnt/constraint/

[TS]: Fixed in latest revision.

I will plough on - my target is by Easter, ie COB 14th April

[TS]: thanks.


Tom Petch

> Thank you,
> Lou (Co-Chair & doc Shepherd)
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