[Teas] teas-yang-rsvp wasRe: TEAS WG Document Status Reports

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From: tom petch <ietfa@btconnect.com>
To: Tarek Saad <tsaad=40juniper.net@dmarc.ietf.org>, "teas@ietf.org" <teas@ietf.org>
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From: Teas <teas-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Tarek Saad <tsaad=40juniper.net@dmarc.ietf.org>
Sent: 21 April 2020 22:39
Subject: [Teas] TEAS WG Document Status Reports

Hi WG,

Below is status reports for the below documents.

Regards,
Tarek (for the document co-authors)


1. draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-23
Current Status:

  *   Version -21 was reviewed by YANG Dr. and received comments

  *   Authors addressed all comments in version -23 (already uploaded).
  *   Team meeting regularly to address open issues – tracked on https://github.com/tsaad-dev/te/issues
  *   Will publish new version -24 before asking for WGLC
Open Issues:
  *   None.
Next Steps:.

  *   Authors will followup with YANG Dr. to make sure no further comments
  *   Will request a Working Group Last Call after completing the above

2. draft-ietf-teas-yang-rsvp-11
Current Status:

<tp>
teas-yang-rsvp-12 would benefit from some tweaks
Abstract confused me into thinking that the Extended model was elsewhere - I think that this needs an explicit mention.

Introduction ditto.

Introduction should mention RFC7950 and RESTCONF

Introduction should mention NMDA support

1.3 is wrong
rt-type I am not familiar with but rt-types is in RFC8294
key-chain is RFC8177

2.4 lists two RPC but tree diagram lists three, one of which is authentication but authentication is a feature of extended not base - this confuses me

revision description
should be 'Initial version' in both modules

the rpc should probably be NACM default deny all

IANA Considerations
URI lack registrant contact
prefix are not those used in the modules

Security
alsocontrols

RFC5495 needs adding to I-D References

Tom Petch






   *   Version -10 was reviewed by YANG Dr. and received comments

  *   Authors published version -12 which addressed all outstanding comments
  *   Authors followed up with YANG Dr. reviewer on closing comments
Open Issues:

  *   None
Next Steps:

  *   Proceed to WGLC


3. draft-ietf-teas-yang-rsvp-te-07
Current Status:

  *   Version -07 was reviewed by YANG Dr. and received comments
Open Issues:

  *   Authors working on addressing YANG Dr. comments
Next Steps:

  *   Folllow-up with YANG Dr. reviewer to close on comments
  *   Proceed to WGLC after addressing

4. draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-mpls
Current Status:

  *   Authors discussing augmentation of this module for MPLS-TP
  *   A new module and model is expected
Open Issues:

  *   Close on MPLS-TP modeling
Next Steps:

  *   Publish a new revision
  *   Ask for YANG Dr. review