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Very fair point,
We had finished revising the text late Friday and rushed to post due to the submission deadline. It did not occur to first post it on the list ( we should have).
Regardless, please let us know your concerns.

Cheers,
Kiran

From: Teas <teas-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Joel M. Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com>
Date: Monday, February 22, 2021 at 09:31
To: teas@ietf.org <teas@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-definition-01.txt
The effort to address the discussion about the term "endpoint" seems to
have made things worse, not better.  I would have expected the changes
to be deferred until we had WG rough consensus on what the changes
should look like.

Yours,
Joel

On 2/22/2021 11:21 AM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Traffic Engineering Architecture and Signaling WG of the IETF.
>
>          Title           : Definition of IETF Network Slices
>          Authors         : Reza Rokui
>                            Shunsuke Homma
>                            Kiran Makhijani
>                            Luis M. Contreras
>                            Jeff Tantsura
>        Filename        : draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-definition-01.txt
>        Pages           : 17
>        Date            : 2021-02-22
>
> Abstract:
>     This document provides a definition of the term "IETF Network Slice"
>     for use within the IETF and specifically as a reference for other
>     IETF documents that describe or use aspects of network slices.
>
>     The document also describes the characteristics of an IETF network
>     slice, related terms and their meanings, and explains how IETF
>     network slices can be used in combination with end-to-end network
>     slices or independent of them.
>
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