[Teas] AD review: draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-types

"BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A" <db3546@att.com> Wed, 01 May 2019 21:14 UTC

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From: "BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A" <db3546@att.com>
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Subject: [Teas] AD review: draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-types
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Hi Authors,

I was just getting ready to start Last Call so as to have both this document and te-topo go together. Scanning the document, I noted the Security section is not sufficient. It needs to use the template of RFC8407 Guidelines for YANG Documents. Refer to draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-topo.

As soon as you update, I'll start Last Call.