Re: [Teas] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-05.txt

Young Lee <leeyoung@futurewei.com> Mon, 01 July 2019 15:50 UTC

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From: Young Lee <leeyoung@futurewei.com>
To: Qin Wu <bill.wu@huawei.com>, "teas@ietf.org" <teas@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Teas] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-05.txt
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Hi Qin,

Sorry for my late response to your comment. I was on vacation last week. Please see the github for my response to your comments. 

https://github.com/younglee-ietf/actn-cmi/issues

Best regards,
Young

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From: Qin Wu [mailto:bill.wu@huawei.com] 
Sent: Tuesday, June 25, 2019 8:46 PM
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Subject: RE: [Teas] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-05.txt

Hi, Young:
I raise two minor issues on github issue tracker. Thanks!

-Qin
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主题: Re: [Teas] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-05.txt

Hi WG,

One more thing, please make use of github for raising issues and providing comments on VN Yang model:
https://nam03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fyounglee-ietf%2Factn-cmi&amp;data=02%7C01%7Cleeyoung%40futurewei.com%7C93c383149fdc4996f89708d6f9d7fdd6%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C636971103417380940&amp;sdata=Fe5ktjugKw1cM%2B5D8yBCwT9EnbM7U6%2FVprcICtehVmM%3D&amp;reserved=0

Thanks.
Young

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Sent: Friday, June 14, 2019 1:44 PM
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Subject: [Teas] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-05.txt

Hi WG,

The changes for this revision are as follows:

- Added in Introduction Section on how the VN model can support 5G transport context. 
- in Section 3.2: case 2 --- clarified how VN model is used along with TE-topo Connectivity matrices construct and added a paragraph to introduce the JSON example of the models (in Section 7)
- For YANG model: converted "ltp" from configurable parameter to leafref type; added references for imported modules.
- Editorial: affiliation changes for a co-author; Compliant with five front page authors' list. 

Thanks.
Young & Dhruv

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Subject: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-05.txt


A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Traffic Engineering Architecture and Signaling WG of the IETF.

        Title           : A Yang Data Model for VN Operation
        Authors         : Young Lee
                          Dhruv Dhody
                          Daniele Ceccarelli
                          Igor Bryskin
                          Bin Yeong Yoon
	Filename        : draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-05.txt
	Pages           : 56
	Date            : 2019-06-14

Abstract:
   This document provides a YANG data model generally applicable to any
   mode of Virtual Network (VN) operation.




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