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From: tom petch <ietfa@btconnect.com>
To: Tarek Saad <tsaad=40juniper.net@dmarc.ietf.org>, "teas@ietf.org" <teas@ietf.org>
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From: Teas <teas-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Tarek Saad <tsaad=40juniper.net@dmarc.ietf.org>
Sent: 21 April 2020 22:39
Subject: [Teas] TEAS WG Document Status Reports

Some thoughts on yang-te-mpls-03 which may change if MPLS-TP gets added:-)

Abstract mentions RPC Notifications which there do not seem to be

1.2 prefixes
te-mpls I think RFC XXXX better since the RFC Editor will be changing that elsewhere

te-mpls-types I am not familiar with

ietf-mpls-static is imported but not listed.

1.3
would be easier to read as a list
suggest adding ECMP, SPF

2.2 lacks a reference to the Tree diagram RFC

identity tunnel-action
sounds as if there will be an action but I do not see one

augments lack a conditional for mpls-te. admittedly they are to te:te and so not to all and sundry; I am unsure whether this is needed or not

description "foo"
eh?

Figure 3
title seems somewhat overarching

IANA Considerations
URI lacks registrant
module should reference XXXX not the MPLS RFC

Security
out of date lacks RESTCONF TLS etc

I-D References
lacks 4124

Tom Petch




Hi WG,

Below is status reports for the below documents.

Regards,
Tarek (for the document co-authors)


1. draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-23
Current Status:

  *   Version -21 was reviewed by YANG Dr. and received comments

  *   Authors addressed all comments in version -23 (already uploaded).
  *   Team meeting regularly to address open issues – tracked on https://github.com/tsaad-dev/te/issues
  *   Will publish new version -24 before asking for WGLC
Open Issues:
  *   None.
Next Steps:.

  *   Authors will followup with YANG Dr. to make sure no further comments
  *   Will request a Working Group Last Call after completing the above

2. draft-ietf-teas-yang-rsvp-11
Current Status:

  *   Version -10 was reviewed by YANG Dr. and received comments

  *   Authors published version -12 which addressed all outstanding comments
  *   Authors followed up with YANG Dr. reviewer on closing comments
Open Issues:

  *   None
Next Steps:

  *   Proceed to WGLC


3. draft-ietf-teas-yang-rsvp-te-07
Current Status:

  *   Version -07 was reviewed by YANG Dr. and received comments
Open Issues:

  *   Authors working on addressing YANG Dr. comments
Next Steps:

  *   Folllow-up with YANG Dr. reviewer to close on comments
  *   Proceed to WGLC after addressing

4. draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-mpls
Current Status:

  *   Authors discussing augmentation of this module for MPLS-TP
  *   A new module and model is expected
Open Issues:

  *   Close on MPLS-TP modeling
Next Steps:

  *   Publish a new revision
  *   Ask for YANG Dr. review