Re: [Teep] Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-teep-architecture

Nicolae Paladi <n.paladi@gmail.com> Thu, 16 January 2020 13:15 UTC

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Hi,

Opened issue #127 - The definition of "Untrusted Application" under Terminology does not read well.
Suggesting a minor edit (removing one word).

Currently:

Untrusted Application: An application running in a Rich Execution Environment, such as an Android, Windows, or iOS application.

As it reads now, the statement defines an untrusted application as an application that is running in a Rich Execution Environment (REE). The statement next provides examples of REEs - "Android", "Windows"; and continues with an example of an application "iOS application". This set of examples is inconsistent and hence confusing.

Suggested
Untrusted Application: An application running in a Rich Execution Environment, such as an Android, Windows, or iOS.


Best regards,

Nicolae


> On 23 Dec 2019, at 13:17, Konda, Tirumaleswar Reddy <TirumaleswarReddy_Konda@McAfee.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi all,
>  
> This message starts a Work Group Last Call (WGLC) for TEEP architecture.  The version to be reviewed is https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-teep-architecture-05 <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-teep-architecture-05>
>  
> The WGLC will last for 4 weeks and will end on 20 January 2020.
>  
> Please send your comments to the list before this date and your assessment of whether or not it is ready to proceed to publication.
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> Tiru & Nancy
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