Re: [Teep] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teep-architecture-14.txt

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This revision seems to introduce a new term in Section 4.4.2: "TEE OS".  It only appears once, so I would prefer to see this reworded to not create this term.  I suggest the phrase instead: "A trusted OS running in the TEE".  I believe this phrase has the same meaning.

Russ

> On Feb 22, 2021, at 2:59 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Trusted Execution Environment Provisioning WG of the IETF.
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>        Title           : Trusted Execution Environment Provisioning (TEEP) Architecture
>        Authors         : Mingliang Pei
>                          Hannes Tschofenig
>                          Dave Thaler
>                          David Wheeler
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-teep-architecture-14.txt
> 	Pages           : 34
> 	Date            : 2021-02-22
> 
> Abstract:
>   A Trusted Execution Environment (TEE) is an environment that enforces
>   that any code within that environment cannot be tampered with, and
>   that any data used by such code cannot be read or tampered with by
>   any code outside that environment.  This architecture document
>   motivates the design and standardization of a protocol for managing
>   the lifecycle of trusted applications running inside such a TEE.
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> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
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