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I have no objections to Tal's suggestions.

--- Doug

On Tue, Jul 3, 2018 at 3:27 AM, Tal Mizrahi <tal.mizrahi.phd@gmail.com>
wrote:

> Hi,
>
> I believe this draft is almost ready for publication, with a couple of
> comments below.
>
> A couple of comments:
> - The section "Forbidden PTP Options" should include also unicast
> discovery and unicast negotiation (mentioned in previous sections).
> - In the "Security Considerations" section - I suggest to add a general
> comment: "General security considerations of time protocols are discussed
> in [RFC7384]".
>
> Thanks,
> Tal.
>
> On Wed, Jun 27, 2018 at 6:35 AM, Karen O'Donoghue <odonoghue@isoc.org
> <odonoghue@isoc..org>> wrote:
>
>> Folks,
>>
>> This email begins a quick followup WGLC for the following draft:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-enter
>> prise-profile/
>>
>> This document has been around for a long time, and it has been aligned
>> with the updates planned to IEEE 1588. Please respond on the mailing list
>> with your recommendation on publication of this document along with any
>> final comments that you may have. This WGLC will close on Wednesday 11 July
>> 2018.
>>
>> Regards,
>> Karen
>>
>>
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<div dir=3D"ltr">I have no objections to Tal&#39;s suggestions.=C2=A0=C2=A0=
<div><br></div><div>--- Doug</div></div><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><br><div=
 class=3D"gmail_quote">On Tue, Jul 3, 2018 at 3:27 AM, Tal Mizrahi <span di=
r=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:tal.mizrahi.phd@gmail.com" target=3D"_blank=
">tal.mizrahi.phd@gmail.com</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br><blockquote class=3D"g=
mail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-l=
eft:1ex"><div dir=3D"ltr"><div>Hi,=C2=A0</div><div><br></div>I believe this=
 draft is almost ready for publication, with a couple of comments below.<di=
v><br></div><div>A couple of comments:</div><div>- The section &quot;Forbid=
den PTP Options&quot; should include also unicast discovery and unicast neg=
otiation (mentioned in previous sections).</div><div>- In the &quot;Securit=
y Considerations&quot; section - I suggest to add a general comment: &quot;=
General security considerations of time protocols are discussed in [RFC7384=
]&quot;.</div><div><br></div><div>Thanks,</div><div>Tal.</div></div><div cl=
ass=3D"gmail_extra"><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote"><div><div class=3D"h5">O=
n Wed, Jun 27, 2018 at 6:35 AM, Karen O&#39;Donoghue <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;=
<a href=3D"mailto:odonoghue@isoc..org" target=3D"_blank">odonoghue@isoc.org=
</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br></div></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" sty=
le=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div><=
div class=3D"h5">



<div style=3D"word-wrap:break-word;line-break:after-white-space">
Folks,
<div><br>
</div>
<div>This email begins a quick followup WGLC for the following draft:</div>
<div><a href=3D"https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-ente=
rprise-profile/" target=3D"_blank">https://datatracker.ietf.org/d<wbr>oc/dr=
aft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-enter<wbr>prise-profile/</a></div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>This document has been around for a long time, and it has been aligned=
 with the updates planned to IEEE 1588. Please respond on the mailing list =
with your recommendation on publication of this document along with any fin=
al comments that you may
 have. This WGLC will close on Wednesday 11 July 2018.=C2=A0</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Regards,</div>
<div>Karen</div>
<div><br>
</div>
</div>

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<div><div dir=3D"ltr"><div><div dir=3D"ltr"><div><div dir=3D"ltr">Doug Arno=
ld<div>Principal Technologist<br><div>Meinberg USA</div></div><div>+1-508-3=
09-6268</div><div><br></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div=
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