Re: [tlp-interest] A clerical correction to the IETF Trust Legal Provisions 5.0

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Thu, 02 September 2021 21:14 UTC

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Subject: Re: [tlp-interest] A clerical correction to the IETF Trust Legal Provisions 5.0
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On 02-Sep-21 13:03, John R. Levine wrote:
>>> (b) I strongly suggest adding a note something like
> 
> Done, see 
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FnlAk3gp8AWmwBzwhyr71MC2Jtd8rLYoJ3MVJTggfPw/edit?usp=sharing
> 
>> We might also want to add something about some/most RFCs between 5245-9118 (but please verify these numbers) having incorrect boilerplate text.
> 
> I put in something more generic since the wrong license name is all over 
> the place.

Thanks, John. I guess the RFC Editor could usefully put a note on their own site, too.

   Brian