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Hi,

On 2021-9-2, at 4:03, John R. Levine <johnl@iecc.com> wrote:
> Done, see =
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FnlAk3gp8AWmwBzwhyr71MC2Jtd8rLYoJ3MVJT=
ggfPw/edit?usp=3Dsharing

I added some comments.

Thanks,
Lars




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