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[TLS] Editorial comments for draft-ietf-tls-subcerts

"Patton,Christopher J" <cjpatton@ufl.edu> Thu, 07 June 2018 18:35 UTC

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From: "Patton,Christopher J" <cjpatton@ufl.edu>
To: "tls@ietf.org" <tls@ietf.org>
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Date: Thu, 07 Jun 2018 18:35:04 +0000
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Subject: [TLS] Editorial comments for draft-ietf-tls-subcerts
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Hi all,

Another PR with editorial changes:
<https://github.com/tlswg/tls-subcerts/pull/>
https://github.com/tlswg/tls-subcerts/pull/3

The most significant change is renaming of "DelegatedCredentialParams" to simply "Credential".

Thanks
Christopher Patton

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