Re: [TLS] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8422 (5466)

Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com> Fri, 17 August 2018 04:09 UTC

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Date: Fri, 17 Aug 2018 14:09:13 +1000
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Subject: Re: [TLS] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8422 (5466)
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Looks good.  I would remove the trailing paren instead though.
On Fri, Aug 17, 2018 at 12:08 PM RFC Errata System
<rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>; wrote:
>
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8422,
> "Elliptic Curve Cryptography (ECC) Cipher Suites for Transport Layer Security (TLS) Versions 1.2 and Earlier".
>
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5466
>
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Masato Gosui <mgosui@yahoo-corp.jp>;
>
> Section: 5.3
>
> Original Text
> -------------
>    Actions of the sender:
>
>    The server constructs an appropriate certificate chain and conveys it
>    to the client in the Certificate message.  If the client has used a
>    Supported Elliptic Curves Extension, the public key in the server's
>    certificate MUST respect the client's choice of elliptic curves.  A
>    server that cannot satisfy this requirement MUST NOT choose an ECC
>    cipher suite in its ServerHello message.)
>
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>    Actions of the sender:
>
>    The server constructs an appropriate certificate chain and conveys it
>    to the client in the Certificate message.  If the client has used a
>    Supported Elliptic Curves Extension, the public key in the server's
>    certificate MUST respect the client's choice of elliptic curves.  (A
>    server that cannot satisfy this requirement MUST NOT choose an ECC
>    cipher suite in its ServerHello message.)
>
> Notes
> -----
> This adds the missing opening parenthesis of the last sentence of the "Actions of the sender" paragraph.
>
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> --------------------------------------
> RFC8422 (draft-ietf-tls-rfc4492bis-17)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Elliptic Curve Cryptography (ECC) Cipher Suites for Transport Layer Security (TLS) Versions 1.2 and Earlier
> Publication Date    : August 2018
> Author(s)           : Y. Nir, S. Josefsson, M. Pegourie-Gonnard
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Transport Layer Security
> Area                : Security
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
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