[TLS] Editorial suggestion for tls-subcert document
"Salz, Rich" <rsalz@akamai.com> Thu, 27 August 2020 15:22 UTC
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From: "Salz, Rich" <rsalz@akamai.com>
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Date: Thu, 27 Aug 2020 15:22:00 +0000
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Subject: [TLS] Editorial suggestion for tls-subcert document
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I didn’t make a PR because I wasn’t sure of the exact wording we need.
The explanation of credential has this text:
valid_time: Time in seconds relative to the beginning of the
delegation certificate's notBefore value after which the delegated
credential is no longer valid. This MUST NOT exceed 7 days.
I think adding “, when evaluated against the current time” will really help.