Re: [TLS] TLS Charter Revision

Daniel Kahn Gillmor <dkg@fifthhorseman.net> Mon, 02 December 2013 19:40 UTC

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minor nit-picks:

On 12/02/2013 02:23 PM, Joseph Salowey (jsalowey) wrote:
> o Develop modes to reduce handshake latency, which primarily
> support HTTP-based applications, aiming for one roundtrip
> for a full handshake and one zero roundtrip for repeated
> handshakes.

what does "one zero roundtrip" mean?  should "a full handshake" be "the
first handshake" and "repeated handshakes" be "subsequent handshakes" ?

> A secondary purpose is to maintain previous version of
> the (D)TLS protocols as well as to specifying the Use of

this should probably be either "as well as specifying" or "as well as to
specify", and "Use" shouldn't be capitalized.

	--dkg