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Re: [TLS] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8422 (5466)

Simon Josefsson <simon@josefsson.org> Fri, 17 August 2018 06:30 UTC

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From: Simon Josefsson <simon@josefsson.org>
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Subject: Re: [TLS] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8422 (5466)
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I would also remove the spurious paren instead -- having a MUST NOT
inside a paren seems suboptimal to me.

/Simon

fre 2018-08-17 klockan 14:09 +1000 skrev Martin Thomson:
> Looks good.  I would remove the trailing paren instead though.
> On Fri, Aug 17, 2018 at 12:08 PM RFC Errata System
> <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> > 
> > The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8422,
> > "Elliptic Curve Cryptography (ECC) Cipher Suites for Transport
> > Layer Security (TLS) Versions 1.2 and Earlier".
> > 
> > --------------------------------------
> > You may review the report below and at:
> > http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5466
> > 
> > --------------------------------------
> > Type: Editorial
> > Reported by: Masato Gosui <mgosui@yahoo-corp.jp>
> > 
> > Section: 5.3
> > 
> > Original Text
> > -------------
> >    Actions of the sender:
> > 
> >    The server constructs an appropriate certificate chain and
> > conveys it
> >    to the client in the Certificate message.  If the client has
> > used a
> >    Supported Elliptic Curves Extension, the public key in the
> > server's
> >    certificate MUST respect the client's choice of elliptic
> > curves.  A
> >    server that cannot satisfy this requirement MUST NOT choose an
> > ECC
> >    cipher suite in its ServerHello message.)
> > 
> > Corrected Text
> > --------------
> >    Actions of the sender:
> > 
> >    The server constructs an appropriate certificate chain and
> > conveys it
> >    to the client in the Certificate message.  If the client has
> > used a
> >    Supported Elliptic Curves Extension, the public key in the
> > server's
> >    certificate MUST respect the client's choice of elliptic
> > curves.  (A
> >    server that cannot satisfy this requirement MUST NOT choose an
> > ECC
> >    cipher suite in its ServerHello message.)
> > 
> > Notes
> > -----
> > This adds the missing opening parenthesis of the last sentence of
> > the "Actions of the sender" paragraph.
> > 
> > Instructions:
> > -------------
> > This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary,
> > please
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> > rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party
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> > 
> > --------------------------------------
> > RFC8422 (draft-ietf-tls-rfc4492bis-17)
> > --------------------------------------
> > Title               : Elliptic Curve Cryptography (ECC) Cipher
> > Suites for Transport Layer Security (TLS) Versions 1.2 and Earlier
> > Publication Date    : August 2018
> > Author(s)           : Y. Nir, S. Josefsson, M. Pegourie-Gonnard
> > Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> > Source              : Transport Layer Security
> > Area                : Security
> > Stream              : IETF
> > Verifying Party     : IESG
> > 
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