Re: [TLS] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tls-ticketrequests-02.txt

Jeremy Harris <jgh@wizmail.org> Mon, 30 September 2019 13:56 UTC

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Subject: Re: [TLS] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tls-ticketrequests-02.txt
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On 30/09/2019 14:36, Christopher Wood wrote:
> On Mon, Sep 30, 2019, at 6:28 AM, Hubert Kario wrote:

>>       Clients must therefore
>>       bound the number of parallel connections they initiate by the
>>       number of tickets in their possession, or risk ticket re-use.
>> ```
>>
>> I'm not a native speaker, but shouldn't it be "...therefore bind the 
>> number..."?
> 
> Yes, we can fix it in the next version.

"Bound" reads correctly to me.  You could spell it out in detail
if it is thought confusing:

  "Clients must therefore not start a number of parallel connections
  larger than the number of tickets in their possession"

-- 
Cheers,
  Jeremy