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> On Apr 11, 2023, at 12:50, Salz, Rich <rsalz@akamai.com> wrote:
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> I am commenting on 8447bis. This document is just about ready to move =
forward, but two fixes are needed.
>=20
> Why there are Notes still in the doc (e.g., near end of section 6 it =
says about weaker elliptic curves) and think those should be resolved, =
one way or another, before advancing out of the WG.

There were still notes in s5 and s6 to draw attention to cipher suite =
listing in light of I-D.ietf-tls-deprecate-obsolete-kex and I guess now =
John=E2=80=99s I-D too.  Joe and I will circle with those authors to =
make sure we have the appropriate coverage.

> Sec 7 adds a note that says the experts "will highly encourage =
registrants to provide a link" while Sec 13 says experts "ensure the =
specification is publicly available."  So is that SHOULD or MUST?  (And =
s/highly/strongly/ IMO)

I can get behind s/highly/strongly:
https://github.com/tlswg/rfc8447bis/pull/39

This tweak was introduced as a result of discussions in Philly (IETF115) =
to address David Schinazi=E2=80=99s comment at the mic. If I remember =
correctly, the discussion was that there=E2=80=99s not really a concern =
about exhausting the registry space because it=E2=80=99s a =E2=80=9Cstring=
" registry, but we still wanted the DEs to make sure the structure is =
followed, i.e., "EXPORTER:=E2=80=9D is included. So =E2=80=A6 in some =
respects I think of it as a SHOULD, but then that does clash with s13.

I guess the question is as DE, is the guidance going to lead to =
problems?

> A nit, this line appears multiple times:
>       Setting a "Recommended" column value to Y or D requires =
Standards
> There should probably be quotes around the letters Y and D, for =
consistency with other text.

I hope I got =E2=80=98em all here:
https://github.com/tlswg/rfc8447bis/pull/38

Cheers,

> A post IETF 116 bump to make sure folks get their reviews in. If you =
look at the diffs from RFC 8446 you can see not that much has changed. =
We will also take =E2=80=9CI read it and it looks good=E2=80=9D =
response.=20
>=20
>=20
> Cheers,
> spt
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>> On Mar 28, 2023, at 21:00, Christopher Wood <caw@heapingbits.net =
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