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[TLS] Re: draft-ietf-tls-dtls-rrc-14 ietf last call Artart review

Thomas Fossati <thomas.fossati@linaro.org> Wed, 11 June 2025 07:29 UTC

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Date: Wed, 11 Jun 2025 09:29:23 +0200
From: Thomas Fossati <thomas.fossati@linaro.org>
To: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>
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Hi Russ,

(Some of) your review comments have been addressed in -15 [1].

Let us know if anything blocking has been left out.

I hope our private exchange has clarified the logic behind the pics :-)

Again, thanks for your time and care.

cheers, t

[1] https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-tls-dtls-rrc-14&url2=draft-ietf-tls-dtls-rrc-15

On Wed, Jun 04, 2025 at 09:34:20AM +0100, Russ Housley wrote:
>I will reply to you and not CC everyone,  I will highlight my confusion on a image.
>
>Russ
>
>> On Jun 4, 2025, at 9:32 AM, Thomas Fossati <thomas.fossati@linaro.org> wrote:
>>
>> Hi Russ, thanks for the thorough review.
>>
>> While we work on addressing your comments [1], a couple of
>> clarifications:
>>
>> On Tue, Jun 03, 2025 at 10:08:04AM +0100, Russ Housley via Datatracker
>> wrote:
>>> [...]
>>>
>>> Nits:
>>>
>>> Figure 4: The difference between a dash and a dot is unclear.
>>
>> Sorry, which dash?
>>
>>> Figures 4, 5 and 6: The purpose of lines without numbers is unclear.
>>
>> They are the "new path" and "old path" from Figure 3.
>>
>> cheers, t
>>
>> [1] https://github.com/tlswg/dtls-rrc/pull/85
>

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