Re: [TLS] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tls-tls13-cert-with-extern-psk-03

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Thu, 19 December 2019 13:55 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Subject: Re: [TLS] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tls-tls13-cert-with-extern-psk-03
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Ines, thanks for your review. I entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa


> On Dec 2, 2019, at 6:59 PM, Ines Robles via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>; wrote:
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> Reviewer: Ines Robles
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
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> Document: draft-ietf-tls-tls13-cert-with-extern-psk-??
> Reviewer: Ines Robles
> Review Date: 2019-12-02
> IETF LC End Date: 2019-12-02
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary:
> 
> The document is well written.
> 
> This document specifies a TLS 1.3 extension permitting certificate-based server
> authentication to be combined with an external PSK as an input to the TLS 1.3
> key schedule.
> 
> Major issues: Not found
> 
> Minor issues: Not found
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> I think that would be nice to add in IANA Considerations a table specifying the
> fields of the TLS ExtensionType Values indicated in
> https://www.iana.org/assignments/tls-extensiontype-values/tls-extensiontype-values.xhtml
> 
> Thank you for this document,
> 
> Ines.
> 
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