[TLS] Barry Leiba's Yes on draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate-11: (with COMMENT)

Barry Leiba via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 19 January 2021 14:14 UTC

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Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate-11: Yes

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COMMENT:
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I think this is the first time I’ve reviewed a document where the “References”
section is longer than the rest of the document combined.

Just a couple of nits:

— Section 1.1 —

   Fallback to these versions are prohibited
   through this update.

Fallback “is” prohibited (not “are”).

— Section 6 —

   This documents updates [RFC7525] Section 3.1.1

“document”, singular.