[TLS] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tls-md5-sha1-deprecate-04

Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 27 October 2020 07:35 UTC

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Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team
(Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF
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Document: draft-ietf-tls-md5-sha1-deprecate-04

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2020-10-26
IETF LC End Date: 2020-10-28
IESG Telechat date: NA

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC , no more
comments other than those addressed on the list already.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
[Page 4], Section 7, typo : "deprecated.."-->"deprecated."
[Page 4], Section 8, typo :"resgistry"-->"registry"

Best Regards,
Meral