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List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 22 May 2023 19:59:39 -0000 --Apple-Mail-AADDBC3E-4477-467C-84A6-A2716CCBFE50 Content-Type: text/html; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable We trust the editors will faithfully enact a= ll editorial changes they agree with as the document moves forward in the pr= ocess. If there were non-editorial comments that we overlooked, could you pl= ease resurface them?

Best,
Chris 
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On May 21, 2023, at 7:44 P= M, Rob Sayre <sayrer@gmail.com> wrote:

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On Fri, May 19, 2023 at 5:03=E2=80=AFAM Christopher Wood <caw@heapingbits.net> wrote:
Thanks to everyone who provided revie= ws and feedback for these documents! I believe we have consensus to move bot= h forward with changes that have been incorporated during the review cycle. W= e=E2=80=99ll start preparing the shepherd writeups and then move these on in= the process.

Hi,

The comments I left are not addressed, even the fairly pedestrian correct= ions. EKR answered, although he certainly did not agree with all of them. Fo= r example, the label "resumption_master_secret" still appears, alt= hough that should have been changed in all instances.

thanks,
Rob
 
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