[TLS] Re: Working Group Last Call for RFC8773bis

Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com> Wed, 14 May 2025 16:23 UTC

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Thom:

> I think this looks good.

Thanks for the careful read.

> Small typo: 
> > "Of course, this places significant burden on the generation ane of external PSKs.” 

Fixed in my edit buffer.

> ane -> and

Fixed.

> Another nit:
> 
> > due to the break in the (EC)DH algorithm
> 
> Is this a break of the algorithm or a break in the algorithm?

Good catch. Changed to "break of the (EC)DH algorithm".

Russ