Re: [TLS] Start of Working Group Last Call for ALPN (draft-ietf-tls-applayerprotoneg-01)

Alexey Melnikov <alexey.melnikov@isode.com> Tue, 27 August 2013 12:37 UTC

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Subject: Re: [TLS] Start of Working Group Last Call for ALPN (draft-ietf-tls-applayerprotoneg-01)
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On 15/08/2013 23:27, Joseph Salowey (jsalowey) wrote:
> This is the working group last call for draft-ietf-tls-applayerprotoneg-01. Please send your reviews and comments to the TLS list by September 6, 2013.
>
> The draft can be found at http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tls-applayerprotoneg-01
I read the document and it looks to be well written and useful. I don't 
have any concerns other than the IANA registration procedure already 
discussed on the mailing list.

One minor thing that would have helped me with understanding the 
document: I think it is worth mentioning multiplexing on a single port 
earlier in the document.