[TLS] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-tls-exported-authenticator-14: (with COMMENT)

Erik Kline via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sun, 04 April 2021 01:08 UTC

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Subject: [TLS] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-tls-exported-authenticator-14: (with COMMENT)

Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-tls-exported-authenticator-14: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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[ sections 4 & 5 ]

* "SHOULD use a secure with" ->
  "SHOULD use a secure communications channel with" or
  "SHOULD use a secure transport with" or something?

* "as its as its" -> "as its"

[ section 5.2.3 ]

* I think the first sentence of the first paragraph may not be a
  grammatically complete sentence?

[ section 7 ]

* "following sections describes APIs" ->
  "following sections describe APIs"

[TLS] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-tls… Erik Kline via Datatracker