Re: [TLS] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-tls-ticketrequests-07: (with COMMENT)
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From: "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com>
To: Sean Turner <sean@sn3rd.com>
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Thread-Topic: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-tls-ticketrequests-07: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [TLS] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-tls-ticketrequests-07: (with COMMENT)
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Sean, Thank you for your reply. I am of course happy with them ;-) Regards -éric -----Original Message----- From: Sean Turner <sean@sn3rd.com> Date: Friday, 29 January 2021 at 16:54 To: Eric Vyncke <evyncke@cisco.com> Cc: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-tls-ticketrequests@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-tls-ticketrequests@ietf.org>, TLS Chairs <tls-chairs@ietf.org>, TLS List <tls@ietf.org> Subject: Re: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-tls-ticketrequests-07: (with COMMENT) > On Dec 14, 2020, at 02:52, Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote: > > Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-tls-ticketrequests-07: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tls-ticketrequests/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Thank you for the work put into this document. It is short and easy to > understand. > > I find that the contents of section 1 and of section 2 are quite duplicate. While true, I do sometimes find we end up here because there have been requests to move information forward to the introduction in the draft. Unfortunately, that results in some duplication. I would like to propose that if the draft does not contradict itself that we leave it as is. > In section 2, the use of capitalized word after a ":" looks weird to me but I > am not a native English speaker. I suspect that his might be a style thing so I would like to leave this one for the RFC editor. > I hope that this helps to improve the document, > > Regards, > > -éric > > >
- [TLS] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-tl… Éric Vyncke via Datatracker
- Re: [TLS] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-iet… Sean Turner
- Re: [TLS] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-iet… Eric Vyncke (evyncke)