Re: [TLS] Barry Leiba's Yes on draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate-11: (with COMMENT)

Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie> Tue, 19 January 2021 14:35 UTC

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From: Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie>
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Subject: Re: [TLS] Barry Leiba's Yes on draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate-11: (with COMMENT)
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Hiya,

On 19/01/2021 14:14, Barry Leiba via Datatracker wrote:
> Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate-11: Yes
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> I think this is the first time I’ve reviewed a document where the “References”
> section is longer than the rest of the document combined.

Yeah, it's a bit of an outlier;-)

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> Just a couple of nits:
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> — Section 1.1 —
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>     Fallback to these versions are prohibited
>     through this update.
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> Fallback “is” prohibited (not “are”).
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> — Section 6 —
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>     This documents updates [RFC7525] Section 3.1.1
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> “document”, singular.

Ta. Also fixed in [1] with diff vs. -11 at [2]

S.

[1] 
https://github.com/tlswg/oldversions-deprecate/blob/master/draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate.txt
[2] 
https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate-11.txt&url2=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/tlswg/oldversions-deprecate/master/draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate.txt


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