[TLS] Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-tls-deprecate-obsolete-kex-05.txt

Christian Buchgraber <christian@buchgraber.org> Tue, 10 September 2024 21:11 UTC

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From: Christian Buchgraber <christian@buchgraber.org>
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I found spelling errors in the last draft version and fixed them in this pull request: https://github.com/tlswg/draft-deprecate-obsolete-kex/pull/18

I also added wildcard cipher suite references in the security considerations chapter for better understanding. TLS_DH_* was already referenced in that chapter.

Cheers,
Chris