[TLS] Mohamed Boucadair's No Objection on draft-ietf-tls-8773bis-10: (with COMMENT)

[Mohamed Boucadair via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Mohamed Boucadair has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-tls-8773bis-10: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Hi Russ,

Thanks for the effort put into this specification.

I only reviewed the diff vs RFC8773.

# I-D.ietf-tls-rfc8446bis should be listed as normative.

# I-D.ietf-emu-bootstrapped-tls should be cited as informational given that the only citation is:

CURRENT:
   Another motivation is the use of a public key with a factory-
   provisioned secret value for the initial enrollment of a device in an
   enterprise network [I-D.ietf-emu-bootstrapped-tls].

# Nit: for readers convenience, please point to the exact section where this is defined

OLD:
   The Extension structure is defined in [I-D.ietf-tls-rfc8446bis]; it
   is repeated here for convenience.

NEW:
   The Extension structure is defined in Section 4.2 of [I-D.ietf-tls-rfc8446bis]; it
   is repeated here for convenience.

Cheers,
Med