Re: [TLS] 2nd WGLC: draft-ietf-tls-downgrade-scsv

Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com> Thu, 04 December 2014 00:29 UTC

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Your edit makes sense.

On 3 December 2014 at 15:37, Brian Smith <brian@briansmith.org> wrote:
> Nit: The current draft says "Code Components extracted from this
> document must include Simplified BSD License text as described in
> Section 4.e of the Trust Legal Provisions [...]." The "Section 4" in
> that statement is a hyperlink to section 4 of the draft, but that is
> clearly not what was intended.

That's a tooling problem with the (obviously limited) html conversion,
not a draft issue.