Re: [TLS] Last Call: <draft-ietf-tls-ecdhe-psk-aead-03.txt> (ECDHE_PSK with AES-GCM and AES-CCM Cipher Suites for Transport Layer Security (TLS)) to Proposed Standard

Hi Simon, 

Thank you for the review. I believe we have addressed your comments in our version 04. Please see my comments inline. 

Yours, 
Daniel

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From: TLS [mailto:tls-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Simon Friedberger
Sent: Thursday, May 04, 2017 5:59 PM
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Subject: Re: [TLS] Last Call: <draft-ietf-tls-ecdhe-psk-aead-03.txt> (ECDHE_PSK with AES-GCM and AES-CCM Cipher Suites for Transport Layer Security (TLS)) to Proposed Standard

Nits:

	RFC 4279 reference is missing.
MGLT: It seems the reference is mentioned in the current version in the Normative reference as well  as in the introduction at line 127,  in section 3 line 143. In case you meant another reference, please let us know. 

	"TLS 1.3 and above version, " should probably be "TLS 1.3 and above" or "TLS 1.3 and higher versions"
MGLT: Changed to "TLS 1.3 and higher versions"

On 04/05/17 18:41, The IESG wrote:
> The IESG has received a request from the Transport Layer Security WG
> (tls) to consider the following document:
> - 'ECDHE_PSK with AES-GCM and AES-CCM Cipher Suites for Transport Layer
>    Security (TLS)'
>   <draft-ietf-tls-ecdhe-psk-aead-03.txt> as Proposed Standard
>
> The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits 
> final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the 
> ietf@ietf.org mailing lists by 2017-05-18. Exceptionally, comments may 
> be sent to iesg@ietf.org instead. In either case, please retain the 
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>
> Abstract
>
>
>    This document defines several new cipher suites for the Transport
>    Layer Security (TLS) protocol.  The cipher suites are all based on
>    the Ephemeral Elliptic Curve Diffie-Hellman with Pre-Shared Key
>    (ECDHE_PSK) key exchange together with the Authenticated Encryption
>    with Associated Data (AEAD) algorithms AES-GCM and AES-CCM.  PSK
>    provides light and efficient authentication, ECDHE provides perfect
>    forward secrecy, and AES-GCM and AES-CCM provides encryption and
>    integrity protection.
>
>
>
>
> The file can be obtained via
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tls-ecdhe-psk-aead/
>
> IESG discussion can be tracked via
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tls-ecdhe-psk-aead/ballot/
>
>
> No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.
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