[TLS] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-tls-svcb-ech-07: (with COMMENT)

[Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-tls-svcb-ech-07: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Thanks for the work done in this document (and thanks for removing this part
from the base SVCB I-D). Some suggestions below:

Titles of sections 4 and 5 should include "TLS" to remove any ambiguity with
"DNS" server/client as the topic is about DNS.

Where is "SVCB-reliant" defined in `SVCB-reliant connection establishment` ?

While the examples of section 7 are welcome, I find the use of figure legends
for explanations quite unreadable (notably because they are sometimes too
concise and they do not clearly delineate the different examples).