Re: [TLS] Last Call: <draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate-09.txt> (Deprecating TLSv1.0 and TLSv1.1) to Best Current Practice

Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie> Mon, 14 December 2020 20:38 UTC

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Subject: Re: [TLS] Last Call: <draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate-09.txt> (Deprecating TLSv1.0 and TLSv1.1) to Best Current Practice
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Hiya,

On 14/12/2020 19:25, Gary Gapinski wrote:
> On 11/28/20 10:13 AM, Stephen Farrell wrote:
>> Hiya,
>>
>> On 28/11/2020 04:39, Gary Gapinski wrote:
>>> Looking at https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate-09
>>> <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate-09> §2:
>>>
>>>    * §2 ¶5 has «TLS 1.3, specified in TLSv1.3 [RFC8446]…».
>>>    * §2 ¶4 has «TLSv1.2, specified in RFC5246 [RFC5246]…»
>>>    * §2 ¶3 has «TLS 1.1, specified in [RFC4346]…»
>>>
>>> Were these variant ( specified in plaintext+[link], specified in link+[link],
>>> specified in [link] ) citation forms deliberate?
>>
>> Nope. We'll make 'em more consistent. 
> 
> There are still "double cites" — …RFCnnnn [RFCnnnn]… — visible in the draft 10
> HTML. Perhaps an RFC tooling problem as you had suspected.

Probably not all, but the RFC editor will eventually sort
that kind of thing out according to their preferred style
so I left it be (also being a little bit lazy, I admit:-)

Cheers,
S.