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Re: [TLS] [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-tls-ecdhe-psk-aead-04

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 24 May 2017 15:16 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Subject: Re: [TLS] [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-tls-ecdhe-psk-aead-04
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Dan, thank you for your reviews of this document and thanks to the authors for providing clarifications. I have balloted No Objection.

Alissa

> On May 19, 2017, at 6:43 PM, Dan Romascanu <dromasca@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-tls-ecdhe-psk-aead-??
> Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
> Review Date: 2017-05-19
> IETF LC End Date: 2017-05-18
> IESG Telechat date: 2017-05-25
> 
> Summary:
> 
> This is a straight-forward and clear document that defines several new
> cipher suites for the Transport Layer Security (TLS) protocol version
> 1.2 and higher, based on the Ephemeral Elliptic Curve Diffie-Hellman
> with Pre-Shared Key (ECDHE_PSK) key exchange together with the
> Authenticated Encryption with Associated Data (AEAD) algorithms
> AES-GCM and AES-CCM. The document is well written and I appreciate the
> effort to clarify in the Introduction the context, what was missing,
> and why the document is necessary. One issue raised in my initial
> review for draft-03 was addressed, discussed and draft-04 includes
> useful clarification text. 
> 
> The document is Ready
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> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: 
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