Re: [TLS] Start of Working Group Last Call for ALPN (draft-ietf-tls-applayerprotoneg-01)

Tom Ritter <tom@ritter.vg> Tue, 20 August 2013 03:35 UTC

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I found a single typo:

In Section 4, there is a repeated 'the':
the the ability to hide the negotiated protocol

Other than that, I cannot think of anything.

-tom