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Re: [TLS] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate-09

Kathleen Moriarty <kathleen.moriarty.ietf@gmail.com> Wed, 20 January 2021 21:01 UTC

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From: Kathleen Moriarty <kathleen.moriarty.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 20 Jan 2021 16:00:54 -0500
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Cc: Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie>, Mohit Sethi <mohit.m.sethi@ericsson.com>, General Area Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org>, Last Call <last-call@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate.all@ietf.org, "<tls@ietf.org>" <tls@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [TLS] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate-09
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Thank you, Mohit, Stephen, and Alyssa!

On Wed, Jan 20, 2021 at 2:34 PM Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> wrote:

> Mohit, thanks for your review. Stephen, thanks for your response. I
> entered a Yes ballot.
>
> Alissa
>
> On Nov 25, 2020, at 6:47 AM, Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie>
> wrote:
>
>
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> On 25/11/2020 11:46, Mohit Sethi via Datatracker wrote:
>
> Reviewer: Mohit Sethi
> Review result: Ready
>
>
> Thanks. Will look at those nits when next editing.
>
> Cheers,
> S.
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate-09
> Reviewer: Mohit Sethi
> Review Date: 2020-11-25
> IETF LC End Date: 2020-11-30
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> Summary: This document deprecates older versions of TLS and DTLS. It also
> updates many RFCs that normatively refer to the older TLS/DTLS versions.
> Major issues: None
> Minor issues: None
> Nits/editorial comments: In section 1.1, typo in "waas defined to detect".
> Most references to RFCs are of the form "[RFC7507]". Can we change "RFC
> 7457
> [RFC7457]" to "[RFC7457]" for uniformity. Similarly, perhaps you could
> change
> "RFC5246 [RFC5246]" and "RFC4346 [RFC4346]" to "[RFC5246]" and "[RFC4346]".
> In section 2 "NIST for example have provided " should be "..has
> provided...".
> In section 6 "this document is called out specifically to update text
> implementing the deprecation  recommendations of this document." I was
> initially confused with the repeated usage of "this". Perhaps it would
> help to
> be more explicit.
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Kathleen

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