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Document: draft-ietf-tls-dtls-rrc
Title: Return Routability Check for DTLS 1.2 and DTLS 1.3
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review result: Almost Ready

I am the assigned ART-ART reviewer for this draft. Please treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.


Document: draft-ietf-tls-dtls-rrc-16
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2025-06-19
IETF LC End Date: 2025-06-10
IESG Telechat date: 2025-07-10

Summary: Almost Ready

Thanks for address the vast bulk of my comments on -14,


Major Concerns:

Section 8: The security consideration need to discuss the consequences
of a predictable cookie value.  This will probably require a reference
to RFC 4086.


Minor Concerns:

None.


Nits:

None.



