Re: [TLS] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-tls-ticketrequests-07: (with COMMENT)

[Sean Turner <[e-mail]>]

> On Dec 14, 2020, at 02:52, Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <[e-mail]> wrote:
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> Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-tls-ticketrequests-07: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> Thank you for the work put into this document. It is short and easy to
> understand.
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> I find that the contents of section 1 and of section 2 are quite duplicate.

While true, I do sometimes find we end up here because there have been requests to move information forward to the introduction in the draft. Unfortunately, that results in some duplication. I would like to propose that if the draft does not contradict itself that we leave it as is.

> In section 2, the use of capitalized word after a ":" looks weird to me but I
> am not a native English speaker.

I suspect that his might be a style thing so I would like to leave this one for the RFC editor.

> I hope that this helps to improve the document,
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> Regards,
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> -éric
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