[TLS] Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-tls-wkech-09.txt

[Yaakov Stein <[e-mail]>]

Stephan,

Just a few minor nits:

1. Please reference the term "origin" or use the term "HTTP origin" (or even better "web server") at the beginning
     until the context is understood.
2. s/bindng/binding
3. You state that the document uses ECH as an example, but is more general.
     However, this seems to almost be an afterthought (most of the Intro and all section 3 deals with ECH).
     Can you mention another use case in the intro?
4. Now that the sentence containing "where the web server doesn't have write access" is gone
    the sentence describing the ZF needs to be :
    We use the term "zone factory" (ZF) for an entity which can validate service binding data
    and that has write access to the zone file.
5. s/Yakov/Yaakov/ ;)

Y(J)S


Hiya,

We made a bunch of editorial changes after the comments received at IETF-123 with which the commenters seem ok, so the authors would like to ask if the chairs think this is ready for WGLC. (We understand the plan is to park it after that awaiting more implementation experience which is fine.)

There are no outstanding issues or PRs on the git repo. [1]

Cheers,
S.

[1] https://github.com/sftcd/wkesni

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