[TLS] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-tls-exported-authenticator-14: (with COMMENT)

Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 06 April 2021 15:17 UTC

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Subject: [TLS] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-tls-exported-authenticator-14: (with COMMENT)

Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-tls-exported-authenticator-14: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Thank you for the work put into this document.

Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would be
appreciated), and some nits.

I hope that this helps to improve the document,

Regards,

-éric

== COMMENTS ==

I am trusting the WG and the responsible AD for ensuring that the specific
section in references are the correct ones.

-- Section 2 --
Unsure where the "terminology" part is...

Also, should "Client" and "Server" be defined here ? Reading section 3, I am
still unsure whether the "client" and "server" are the "TLS client" and "TLS
server" ...

In the same vein, a small figure with all parties involved would be welcome by
the reader.

== NITS ==

In some places, 'TLS13' is used as an anchor rather than 'RFC8446'.

Sometimes, the document uses 'octet' and sometimes 'bytes'.

-- Section 1 --
Spurious '.' in the last §.

-- Section 4 --
"as its as its" ?

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