Re: [TLS] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tls-dtls-connection-id-10

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Thu, 22 April 2021 13:24 UTC

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Subject: Re: [TLS] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tls-dtls-connection-id-10
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Russ, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.

Lars


> On 2021-3-15, at 17:28, Russ Housley via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Russ Housley
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-tls-dtls-connection-id-10
> Reviewer: Russ Housley
> Review Date: 2021-03-15
> IETF LC End Date: 2021-03-28
> IESG Telechat date: Unknown
> 
> 
> Summary: Ready
> 
> 
> Major Concerns:  None.
> 
> 
> Minor Concerns:  None.
> 
> 
> Nits:
> 
> Section 4: For increased clarity, I suggest:
> OLD:
>   real_type  The content type describing the payload.
> NEW:
>   real_type  The content type describing the cleartext payload.
> 
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