[TLS]Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-tls-svcb-ech-04.txt

Christopher Patton <cpatton@cloudflare.com> Wed, 21 August 2024 13:46 UTC

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Changes to Section 5.1 look good to me!

On Tue, Aug 20, 2024 at 10:00 AM Salz, Rich <rsalz=
40akamai.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:

>
> I read the document [1].  I think it's ready for WGLC. I suggest one
> change. I find the use of "bootstrapping" in the title misleading.  I
> suggest "Enabling TLS Encrypted ClientHello via DNS Service Bindings."
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> [1] https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tls-svcb-ech/
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